Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:34:55I fucking died
Best XNXX story of 2013anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:06:47If I may be honest, this isn’t really one of your best…sort of like a pornographic take on that film Jack Frost.«1» Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! Bravo, rutger5, you’ve constructed something of unfathomable…something. xxx 5 comments«1»Norton XReport 2014-07-16 07:32:24Definitely a very well-written sex story. Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! I disagree with the comment about the synonyms, I found them both charming and witty!!!! I disagree with the comment about the synonyms, I found them both charming and witty!!!! 5 comments«1»Norton XReport 2014-07-16 07:32:24Definitely a very well-written sex story. I’d say it’s a fucking joke but the amount of work and detail
