you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. xxx video Your getting better!!!«123» pick one!! Just write these up in microsoft word, use spell check and you should be good.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-27 05:00:27respectAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-26 15:11:56I like it.. this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. You need to watch your tences… 11 comments«123»IntriguedReport 2008-08-12 01:19:51So when is part three coming out? you go from past to present back to past..
