Right now, you have these ridiculous change ups that are kind of hard to swallow.«1» Right now, you have these ridiculous change ups that are kind of hard to swallow.«1» The idea of the story is good, but you need more of a turn into the content. xxx very goo though i like it :)READERReport 2008-01-03 16:52:27ok since no one liked parts 3-5 i will allow you to tell me what to add on to part 2 i will make a new part 3 based on your ideasREADERReport 2007-12-25 20:43:33The transitions are still not making any sense. The idea of the story is good, but you need more of a turn into the content. The idea of the story is good, but you need more of a turn into the content.
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Alex Tanner
