Why is it so short?READERReport 2004-08-10 17:57:41A little shot this time but great none the less.READERReport 2004-02-15 16:25:15everything master roth says is true! xxx 18 from Krim.READERReport 2004-02-14 01:39:35Ahhh, yes. from Krim.READERReport 2004-02-14 01:39:35Ahhh, yes. Why is it so short?READERReport 2004-08-10 17:57:41A little shot this time but great none the less.READERReport 2004-02-15 16:25:15everything master roth says is true! What the fuck? this is making a very good scene. This is what we in the screenwriting business call, raising the “dramatic question.” Her predicament has succeeded in raising the level of interest in the reader above that of the simply curious by describing something we can all empathize with and in so doing have created a character with depth and her emotions are that much more real.«1» What the fuck? keep it up and i may find out who you are and pay
