Three of them confuses the story and makes it hard to follow. Three of them confuses the story and makes it hard to follow. xxx18 Join a writing group and develop your talent.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-26 04:01:23the switching of narrators is a bit hard to follow, but good storyvtsReport 2008-10-25 02:48:33more please, how about all three holes at once«1» and third, learn to write. You have a certain ability but you try to be clever. and third, learn to write. Three of them confuses the story and makes it hard to follow. and third, learn to write. and third, learn to write. Join a writing group and develop your talent.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-26 04:01:23the switching of narrators is a bit hard to follow, but good storyvtsReport 2008-10-25 02:48:33more please, how about all three holes at once«1»
