WOrk on it. xxx WOrk on it. not too well writed, either. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-12-23 05:40:05short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10READERReport 2005-08-01 23:12:17booREADERReport 2005-07-16 03:53:07You need to make it last a bit longer. WOrk on it. 5/10READERReport 2005-07-16 00:13:57Too short, son. not too well writed, either. WOrk on it. not too well writed, either. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-12-23 05:40:05short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10READERReport 2005-08-01 23:12:17booREADERReport 2005-07-16 03:53:07You need to make it last a bit longer. 5/10READERReport 2005-07-16 00:13:57Too short, son. 3/10«1» Stretch it out, and talk describe the woman getting fucked a bit better. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-12-23 05:40:05short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10READERReport 2005-08-01 23:12:17booREADERReport 2005-07-16 03:53:07You need to make it last a bit longer. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-12-23 05:40:05short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10READERReport 2005-08-01 23:12:17booREADERReport 2005-07-16 03:53:07You need to make it last a bit longer.
