Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. xxx 18 She has a great story of her own here, so she knows what she is talking about. You did a great job of writing. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. She has a great story of her own here,
