the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. xxx video and i like how detailed you get about your characters sexual sensations, but a lot of them are common to a few of your stories, so maybe you could look for a new way to describe pleasure? i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10’s.

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