You need to learn to use them. xxx18 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. Allways wanted to see Harry with her & Ron with Luna & Ginny with Nevel. But great story keep it going.«12» Also, spell check. As well as capitalizing words at the beginning of sentences. Also, spell check. But great story keep it going.«12» As well as capitalizing words at the beginning of sentences. It’s a good story that could be better if you took a few extra minutes to read over your work before posting it.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-14 07:52:52harry /hermione part awesomeanonymous readerReport 2012-02-19 15:52:07so lets have the next parts to the storyanonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 23:43:16hermoini is incredible wow i always wanted her with harry thoughanonymous readerReport 2011-06-02 10:06:35Well I have never been a fan of Ron & Hermy.
