Please rewrite and submit after proof reading it first. 31 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-14 11:19:42Yes, your writing skills are very poor and I will give it to the other critics for that. xxx video As far as the content. 4/10 writing skills
8/10 story line.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:23:29that sucked the little girl was only four atleast u could have done was your 11 old daughter thes people make sickBig Willy.Report 2010-05-17 17:47:55You have a reasonable writing style but your lousy spelling spoils it, words like through, you wrote throw, are hardly difficult, perhaps English isn’t your first language. The poor sad twats who rant at you seem to be too fucking stupid to realize that fiction means it’s not fucking real and it didn’t fucking happen, it’s just words loonies.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-23 18:24:57Erm…kinda sick tbh.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-12 23:41:15XD a four year is not
