It takes away from the story.«12» It takes away from the story.«12» 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:43:14Boy that relaly helps me the heck out.READERReport 2004-12-04 02:36:34theres a thing called quotations and stuff like that. . xxx18 … 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:43:14Boy that relaly helps me the heck out.READERReport 2004-12-04 02:36:34theres a thing called quotations and stuff like that. . … 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 04:43:14Boy that relaly helps me the heck out.READERReport 2004-12-04 02:36:34theres a thing called quotations and stuff like that. . … It takes away from the story.«12» It takes away from the story.«12» and smaller paragraphs dont clump it all up like thatREADERReport 2004-10-11 21:48:57okay.READERReport 2004-04-13 10:13:09It could have been a good story, but i don’t think the author proof read it. . . …READERReport 2004-04-07 05:02:47Too many god damned exclamation marks.
