4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-01-14 11:23:26Lack of punctuation made it difficult to read. Good story though.«1» Good story though.«1» Good story though.«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-01-14 11:23:26Lack of punctuation made it difficult to read. xxx18 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-01-14 11:23:26Lack of punctuation made it difficult to read. Very rushed – needs more detail.READERReport 2007-01-13 23:04:02dfdfdREADERReport 2007-01-13 17:50:03Longer strch out the fuckingREADERReport 2007-01-13 09:58:49Need better punctuation and spelling, was a difficult read. Very rushed – needs more detail.READERReport 2007-01-13 23:04:02dfdfdREADERReport 2007-01-13 17:50:03Longer strch out the fuckingREADERReport 2007-01-13 09:58:49Need better punctuation and spelling, was a difficult read. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-01-14 11:23:26Lack of punctuation made it difficult to read. Very rushed – needs more detail.READERReport 2007-01-13 23:04:02dfdfdREADERReport 2007-01-13 17:50:03Longer strch out the fuckingREADERReport 2007-01-13 09:58:49Need better punctuation and spelling, was a difficult read. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-01-14 11:23:26Lack of punctuation made it difficult to read. Good story though.«1»
