And one of the so to say trademark features of wolfs and other canine beings during sex is their knot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-26 07:30:58Ok good story but try making it longer by dragging out the chsrstcter plotlines an action andventure drama storyline an so on an so on…basically try an make it how you would want to read it. . xxx 18 . … but good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 16:43:39i enjoyed as a begginers peice but to improve go in to more detail, describe the character e.g. gender, and make the scenes longer do that and the stories will be brilliantanonymous readerReport 2012-01-07 22:02:12I loved how you added the end«12» but good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 16:43:39i enjoyed as a begginers peice but to improve go in to more detail, describe the character e.g.
