You didn’t rush it, its realistic, and write more. 6 comments«12»MR.koolReport 2011-05-24 16:03:19THIS WAS A GOOD STORY! xxx i loved it 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 18:07:38Keep it up bro that was good!VANDENALReport 2011-05-23 12:47:16Damn! That was great. Great start to the story«12» You didn’t rush it, its realistic, and write more. i loved it 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 18:07:38Keep it up bro that was good!VANDENALReport 2011-05-23 12:47:16Damn! 10 out of 10. That was great. i loved it 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 18:07:38Keep it up bro that was good!VANDENALReport 2011-05-23 12:47:16Damn! I could picture this whole thing happening.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 02:48:49I feel that you should continue this for sure.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 01:43:44i take back the previous commen t. 6 comments«12»MR.koolReport 2011-05-24 16:03:19THIS WAS A GOOD STORY!
