Tim what part wasnt realistic, similar experience happened me. xxx 7 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-24 09:02:07Victoria needs some counseling or better yet some medication to turrn her on. if not oh well. I do like hear feedback as it shows me how I can improve my stories. Retired MDREADERReport 2006-08-06 23:25:37Hi everyone, thanks for the feedback on my story, Shattered means tired baller, im from northern ireland so thats the slang for tired here. keep writing.READERReport 2006-07-31 02:40:51The story is alright:) Starts pretty realistic .. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-24 09:02:07Victoria needs some counseling or better yet some medication to turrn her on. if not oh well. but I think it gets less realistic to the end.. but yeah.. A longer story has been wrote tonight so should be on display within a few daysREADERReport 2006-08-03 21:39:59Nice since I am in IRAQ even better
