If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. xxx 18 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-11 00:34:54Typos and grammar are overrated, I loved this story, I could barely get thru it all!READERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 20:01:48Great story, a few typo’s here and there (but who doesn’t make mistakes). hey, dumb-ass, it’s “hearing.” You couldn’t write a grocery list, you boring individual. hey, dumb-ass, it’s “hearing.” You couldn’t write a grocery list, you boring individual. 1/10«12» Hereing??? Hereing??? If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write.
