Part one was amazing.. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. xxx absolute gold.. Part one was amazing.. absolute gold.. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. Part one was amazing.. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-19 01:30:44Part 1 was excellent. you had solid gold going here with the blackmail, and the characters were believable…then you threw it away so fast
I agree. The angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. the angle with the kid in part 2 took the whole story and made it seem implausible. You had solid gold going here with the blackmail, and the characters were believable…then you threw it away so fastREADERReport 2007-12-23 16:45:17omg imma go master now if ull exuse
