No not just good but excellent. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-10 19:42:28loved your writing. xxx video …!!! Also the story is being told from the first person so some of the issues are the characters, this is why I never go into the thoughts of other characters. What application are you currently using? If this is fun and practised, I could only imagine your story if you’re serious and commited. I haven’t played in a while and want to find a group again. Jus amazingWolf_KnightReport 2012-08-10 13:12:56I am writing it in Microsoft Office Word 2007, to correct most of the spelling errors I’ve gone back through repeatedly before posting. Its because of such problems that I am just an avid reader only.«12» Jus amazingWolf_KnightReport 2012-08-10 13:12:56I am writing it in Microsoft Office Word 2007, to correct most of the spelling errors
