My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story. xxx This became confusing after awhile. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. The second problem was that it became repetitive. dude, dont copy! The second problem was that it became repetitive. There was no change is style between the different characters.
