Have someone with some grammatical intelligence correct your work. xxx Have someone with some grammatical intelligence correct your work. Hey, at least you tried; and ALL kids deserve trophies just for trying.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-05 13:02:082nd sentence – “loving”? You fixed the errors in part 1? 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-05 13:07:48OMG! No way!!! 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-05 13:07:48OMG! Shouldn’t it be “lovingly”?Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-26 12:36:52Yng is illglAnonymous readerReport 2016-05-31 08:49:14Mmmm i love itfamliboiReport 2016-04-01 06:42:08Great story keep it going would love to read about jonny having sex with Mrs Wiggen’s daughters – maybe even have him babysit them while Mrs W goes out«123» No way!!! You fixed the errors in part 1? Shouldn’t it be “lovingly”?Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-26 12:36:52Yng is illglAnonymous readerReport 2016-05-31 08:49:14Mmmm i love itfamliboiReport 2016-04-01 06:42:08Great story keep it going would love to read about jonny having sex with Mrs Wiggen’s daughters
