12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-12 15:47:05Powerful strong very positive writing and nice ending. xxx 18 5★★★★★for you.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-02 16:46:36OMG! 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-12 15:47:05Powerful strong very positive writing and nice ending. It seems like, rather than take an opportunity to comment on your writing every fucking moron in the world is looking for a hook-upanonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:38pplz my friend wants ppl to ask stuff or talk to her on ask.fm/akaErin ,,«123» 5★★★★★for you.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-02 16:46:36OMG! BEST STORY EVER AND COMONG FROM ME THATS SAYING SOMETHINGanonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 04:03:57Good but a lil to short wish there would have been more description on how he fucked her also it would have been better if this would have happened wen they were teenagersanonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 22:09:13I liked your story but I’m rather disappointed. It seems like, rather than take an opportunity to comment on




















