profile and I had to create a new one just to respond on here. that would just ruin everything.«1» xbrowser58Report 2012-12-29 14:32:42Good start, but you need better formatting for readability. xxx profile and I had to create a new one just to respond on here. profile and I had to create a new one just to respond on here. but please dont turn Guy into a sadistic asshole. but please dont turn Guy into a sadistic asshole. that would just ruin everything.«1» Smaller paragraphs and blank line between paragraphs at a minimum.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-29 11:14:51Good story so far, cant wait for more. that would just ruin everything.«1» profile and I had to create a new one just to respond on here. 5 comments«1»P.O.I.Report 2012-12-29 20:00:19Thanks for the advice so far, sadly something was wrong with my original P.O.I.
