The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! xxx 18 Why did she get pregnant the first time with her eight year old daughter Sarina Marie by someone else?? So much information is missing that even the reader’s imagination can’t overcome!Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 02:38:58YER STORIES ARE SHIT JUST SO YOU KNOW MATEAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-19 04:08:59Ok that’s throwed off but a touching storyanonymous readerReport 2013-10-10 14:23:16D story is Good as well I love itjdm320Report 2013-10-01 11:29:09Story was not bad. There are minimal grammatical errors. The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! The most valid subject that is missing is no insight into the second pregnancy of sister Mary, and the secrecy leading to or causing her to get pregnant the second time with someone
