4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-09-01 22:30:26I read that in about 2 seconds. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-09-01 22:30:26I read that in about 2 seconds. xxx this is making a very good scene. keep up the good work. keep up the good work. keep up the good work. keep it up and i may find out who you are and pay you for more stories. from Krim.READERReport 2004-02-14 01:39:35Ahhh, yes. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-09-01 22:30:26I read that in about 2 seconds. This is what we in the screenwriting business call, raising the “dramatic question.” Her predicament has succeeded in raising the level of interest in the reader above that of the simply curious by describing something we can all empathize with and in so doing have created a character with depth and her emotions are that much more real.«1» This is what we in the
