In order to make a good story, you have to make characters we can relate to, sympathize with, root for or just plain want to see them get beat down. xxx 18 This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. kinda.. Oh the idea of survival in a post apocalyptic word inhabited by humans and those mutated by a horrible virus has potential, but given the direction the author is taking this one – well if that’s what it takes to blow your dress up by all means continue reading the series. i thimk this should have been added to the first and unless i missread the forshadowing
