Chow b001 out.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-04 07:49:08not bad but a little confusing-DaAntiChristanonymous readerReport 2012-05-24 19:04:35This is a VERY confusing
piece to try and read, it’s difficulty is the need to try and work out who’s who.«12» 8 comments«12»anonymouslytightnwetReport 2017-04-24 03:49:06Not what I was expectinganonymous readerReport 2013-10-29 12:40:07Hmm slapping, that’s not girldom, dickhead, it’s nasty little boy.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-08 23:17:40I don’t get what people are saying this is a great follow up I can’t really find that many errors and they definitely don’t interfere that much with the story I saw that you haven’t updated this story it’s good real good hope to see an update good. xxx 18 Chow b001 out.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-04 07:49:08not bad but a little confusing-DaAntiChristanonymous readerReport 2012-05-24 19:04:35This is a VERY confusing
piece to try and read, it’s difficulty is the need to try and work out who’s who.«12»
