1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. xxx look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence. but labling is important. but labling is important. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. i’m bored by incest. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. but labling is important. look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence. but labling is important. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s.
