This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave. xxx18 So 10 year old twins Jesse and Tanya Oldman got out there shorts and vests to outside in they were identical twins so they liked to dress in the same clothes as each other today they were wearing plain white vests and tiny pink shorts they always got dressed together aswell because they were twins it didn’t matter they both looked the same the had long blonde hair small cute faces flat chests long legs and they were
Actors:
Rica / Toru Kurosawa
