5 comments«1»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 05:54:00I’ll be honest with you… xxx video Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none. Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none. 5 comments«1»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 05:54:00I’ll be honest with you… When I read, whether it’s a book, short story, fan fiction, etc… Which was done well right in the beginning when you described your charecter in the closet. Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none.
