RE-WRITE WITH PARAGRAPSH OR DON’T POST!!!!!! I have to agree with most of the previous comments. xxx18 TOO HARD TO READ!! TOO HARD TO READ!! TOO HARD TO READ!! Some editing AND paragraphs would enhance the readers experience.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 00:38:26Just a suggestion. I have to agree with most of the previous comments. GAVE NEGATIVE RATING DUE TO LACK OS PARAGRAPHS!!! I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick? 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-04 04:27:32THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO PARAGRAPHS!!! im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick?
