Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. xxx Remember that it is always easier for people to criticize and insult than to actually work and (god forbid) think. Ignore jerk comments. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. Thanks.«1» Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. grammar was atrocious. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school
