In all 3 stories there have been “too many” exclamation points. xxx In all 3 stories there have been “too many” exclamation points. There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you’re on.«12» Secondly, get yourself a name that doesn’t sound like someone barfing, “ufdhzsyg”. That includes grammar, capitalization, and spaces after periods. Secondly, get yourself a name that doesn’t sound like someone barfing, “ufdhzsyg”. 6 comments«12»Jeffezy626Report 2019-02-21 10:15:50Is the story ending here or do you intend to continue itanonymous readerReport 2013-02-26 21:46:18The story is amazing but I have some criticism. But know I’m truthful, it is a magnificent story.namelessReport 2009-07-24 13:51:38Fantastic what else is in store for Quencie and Alison and just a little request I’ve read of the other two stories as well and dob’t get me wrong I like what I’m reading


















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