5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-09 04:14:55This should have been a great story here but it was put in a simple point of view with no real meat to the story. xxx18 But if you really want critiism here use this as a sketch and rewrite it with more background and feeling and yes i mean sex. Not bad, though.«1» It’s a completey understandable mistake, but is kind if weird when reading it.Anonymous readerReport 2011-03-03 09:06:58This could have been so much better. It lacks great description or a real plot. I fuck my own mother’s pussy X2-3/wk. Then you have a great story.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-23 04:57:58it was grate cud you add a part two where thay find out ther mom and dad are like them plezanonymous readerReport 2011-03-13 15:11:37I love your story.
