SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. Keep going just slow down.«1» SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. xxx18 Keep going just slow down.«1» (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. Take it to the final phase and then end it. When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the
