Idea and concept are great, execution is horrible.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:19:03You separated the big block of text but the story is still filled with wrong words and words that are out of order. xxx 18 Your don’t speak English. Or her boyfriends hero?anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:24:59I just realized!!! But I’m sure its yet another example of using the wrong word, which this story is full of. Or her boyfriends hero?anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:24:59I just realized!!! 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 11:35:41It’s obvious that the bf here stands for best friend not boy friend!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:43:12This is a new title, but it the same story. But I’m sure its yet another example of using the wrong word, which this story is full of. But I’m sure its yet another example of using the wrong word, which this story is full of.
