Not enough details. good story«123» good story«123» also try not to use computer talk such as “omg”READERReport 2005-07-27 19:23:02Chris why are you reading a story marked gay, rape and boy if you don’t like gay stuf f and gross are you saying people never leave the house for more tanh 1 1/2 hours, and is says fiction why you read this if you don’t like rape fantasy. xxx 18 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. You rushed it. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. Not enough details. and thats all it is Fantasy. good story«123» also try not to use computer talk such as “omg”READERReport 2005-07-27 19:23:02Chris why are you reading a story marked gay, rape and boy if you don’t like gay stuf
