If you actually took pride in your writing you would not submit for publication a story so grammatically flawed. Also when writing a multi-part story you can’t assume that the reader has always read the previous parts, so your opening paragraph must summarize who the characters are and how they got to the point where this part begins. xxx18 As another reader so aptly pointed out there are Spell Checkers and Grammar Checkers available with most word processing software. Also when writing a multi-part story you can’t assume that the reader has always read the previous parts, so your opening paragraph must summarize who the characters are and how they got to the point where this part begins.
Actors:
Marin Suzumi / Yagoto
