Great work really, my stuff is no where near as good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-25 16:52:43Weird, overblown, and boring. xxx18 Great work really, my stuff is no where near as good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-25 16:52:43Weird, overblown, and boring. The rating says it all.«1» Incredibly descriptive and fluid writing that simply kept me wanting to read more and more. Incredibly descriptive and fluid writing that simply kept me wanting to read more and more. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-23 09:46:11I fail to understand why the rating of the story is so low. Great work really, my stuff is no where near as good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-25 16:52:43Weird, overblown, and boring. Keep up the good work, you certainly have made a fan out of me.wickedkittenReport 2010-07-05 03:19:59I really don’t understand why anyone would not enjoy this story, if people are looking for a story, this is a
