It’s like you knew what you wanted to create for us but got bored in the telling. xxx Other than that i thought the premise was terrific. 10 comments«12»readerReport 2008-08-11 19:08:18mycomment is the same thank youAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-19 20:52:59I thought the story was good until this last chapter.. I feel this, regardless of wome written comments, well versed and very, very interested. I feel this, regardless of wome written comments, well versed and very, very interested. Other than that i thought the premise was terrific. 10 comments«12»readerReport 2008-08-11 19:08:18mycomment is the same thank youAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-19 20:52:59I thought the story was good until this last chapter.. I feel this, regardless of wome written comments, well versed and very, very interested. It’s like you knew what you wanted to create for us but got bored in the telling.
