260 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-15 15:45:51the story was ok not enough character development or background and you fucked up the end. xxx this would have got a posative vote IF you hadn’t fucked it up so bad but as is it gets a NEGATIVE vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-12 17:42:02the end killed the story, why would they even allow the moms to watch. this would have got a posative vote IF you hadn’t fucked it up so bad but as is it gets a NEGATIVE vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-12 17:42:02the end killed the story, why would they even allow the moms to watch. really strange!ImpaxReport 2012-04-17 12:03:16I gave it a pos vote, but only for the beginning. It’s like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one
