Get one of your readers. Also the word [was’nt] is misspelled – try [wasn’t]!Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-20 10:57:01Wat happened 2 the twins after they were thrown aboard ?READERReport 2008-03-04 08:00:41ew…«123» Get one of your readers. xxx 18 You just need someone who can proofread for you. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-09 13:10:48i did not get the story the sex parts were okay but needed too be more eroticAnonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 15:53:46Awsome story though wat happened to the twins and did she get killed you should do anotherAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:43:50Realy GOOD story. Here is a bit of grammar that might help you: a sentence is ended by a period (that you have), but then before you start another sentence put in one or two spaces. Get one of your readers.
