wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. xxx video He’s only 11 when he wrote it! And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.READERReport 2008-04-08 00:07:42Um. but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» His FIRST storie and 3. FFS dont try encouraging the twat.READERReport 2007-06-08 23:21:02Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.READERReport 2007-04-22 16:25:461. 2. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. He’s only 11 when he wrote it!
