That’s just disgusting. I enjoyed it. xxx18 Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. I don’t like insest. I don’t like insest. That’s just disgusting. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. I enjoyed it. I don’t like insest. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it.
