8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE. xxx video . …STOP. . …WRITING!!!!!!! Give it up. …u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just. …stop writing. …OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! Give it up. …u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just. …stop writing. …OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! If you write again which I don’t suggest. You write like a half retarded twelve year old.. Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school??
