SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. xxx18 (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? You have the idea in the back of your head you just don’t know how to tell your fingers to type it in. It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Keep going just slow down.«1» Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. Keep going just slow down.«1» Keep going just slow down.«1» Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. Your doing fine, don’t give up.
