Clean it up a bit more and don’t just write it as you are jacking it, and you’ll get a better response. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-10 13:54:50The reasons most people are anal, probably has something to do with the fact that we completed school and matured completely, and we are looking for the same in what we read. xxx 18 Now to the author, I usually would pass over minor misspellings, but my god man they were all over the place not to mention your verb choices made it hard to understand what you were trying to say. Now to the author, I usually would pass over minor misspellings, but my god man they were all over the place not to mention your verb choices made it hard to understand what you were trying to say.
