Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow. xxx18 I especially liked the way you paragraphed dialogue & ideas. 2 comments«1»Dudley DowrongReport 2020-04-02 18:00:01″Sorry, too many votes today” Reading all Ur texts again,& enjoying them.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-14 18:25:37A better approach than many to “help” an young man become more confident. That detracts from the overall enjoyment of the story. Looking forward to how the “training” progresses.«1» 2 comments«1»Dudley DowrongReport 2020-04-02 18:00:01″Sorry, too many votes today” Reading all Ur texts again,& enjoying them.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-14 18:25:37A better approach than many to “help” an young man become more confident. I especially liked the way you paragraphed dialogue & ideas. Too many jamb too much in a paragraph with several conversational dialogues that makes it difficult to follow.
