18 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-05 07:06:498===D~~~(.)(.) gizzzz on bboobbss yeahpappa smurfReport 2009-07-05 17:19:30greatklaxxReport 2009-06-29 01:09:06Shoulda stopped at part 3. xxx 18 This grok is par for the course. i couldnt waiT till the end 2 jerk off 8—-D~~«1234» I really wanna say, thank you for not only writing a great story (hot, dirty, and with enough plot that it doesn’t just collapse) but giving your readers the opportunity to decide for themselves where to end the story, and declaring where you intend to take it. It’s hard to find stories around here that AREN’T dirty talkin’ raunchy. but then read your closing statement… Are you serious? but then read your closing statement… i couldnt waiT till the end 2 jerk off 8—-D~~«1234» but then read your closing statement… Too bad, too – it was going so well.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-23 00:24:53Hey, wasn’t
