Other than that, I loved it! xxx18 The only criticism I can give you is that you could take more time, add more detail, slowly build it up. The only criticism I can give you is that you could take more time, add more detail, slowly build it up. Other than that, I loved it! Silencio would have been better if you were trying to keep Hermione quiet.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-09 14:53:01this is fuckin’ awesome. 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-19 19:30:35It was great.. the only thing that threw me off was the use of Muffliato which makes it sound to others like there is nothing happening.. the only thing that threw me off was the use of Muffliato which makes it sound to others like there is nothing happening..
