Filipina Slut Gets Brutally Pounded By Japanese Cock

Not only that, but the dialogue felt pretty forced at times as well. xxx They’re not professionals either, yet they constantly make professional level work. Take your creations seriously as well. I’m just pointing all of this out to help _you_ become a better author. You may not be a professional author, as you said, but that is still no excuse to have such bad grammar. The grammar issues especially will just turn off so many readers that they won’t care how good the story is. Learn from some of the authors on this site. Give them the attention they deserve and try to make them the best they can be.